Commercial #2,521: #LouisianaRapVaultChallenge, Day 1,090

FTLD'z Commercial Series #26:

#LouisianaRapVaultChallenge:

Day 1,090: July 25, 2025

Frankie's 26th commercial series & 2,032nd day in a row of releasing a commercial!

Starting August 1, 2022, Frankie's promotin' & showin' luv to damn-near every underground, Louisiana rap release from 1983 - 2013! Watch as a total of 23,701 intros, outros, skits, tracks (you name it!) are played from now till June 21, 2087; that's somethin' diff'rent every day!

This series will go on from August 1, 2022 - June 21, 2087. How much do you know about Louisiana's underground?

Music Playing

One-i feat. Sire & Prince Blakk "Center Of Attention" (2009)

#Onei #Sire #PrinceBlakk #DJScrap #BatonRougeLARap #Louisiana #LouisianaLA #LouisianaRap #LouisianaLARap #225 #225Rap #NewOrleans #NewOrleansLA #NewOrleansRap #NewOrleansLARap

Commercial #1,564: #LouisianaRapVaultChallenge, Day 133

FTLD'z Commercial Series #26:

#LouisianaRapVaultChallenge:

Day 133: December 11, 2022

Frankie's 26th commercial series & 1,075th day in a row of releasing a commercial!

Starting August 1, 2022, Frankie's promotin' & showin' luv to damn-near every underground, Louisiana rap release from 1983 - 2013! Watch as a total of 23,701 intros, outros, skits, tracks (you name it!) are played from now till June 21, 2087; that's somethin' diff'rent every day!

This series will go on from August 1, 2022 - June 21, 2087. How much do you know about Louisiana's underground?

Music Playing:

Sire feat. Hype & Dink "Take It Outside" (2009)

#Sire #Hype #Dink #BatonRougeRap #BatonRougeLARap #Louisiana #LouisianaLA #LouisianaRap #LouisianaLARap #225 #225Rap #NewOrleans #NewOrleansLA #NewOrleansRap #NewOrleansLARap

Review #476: C.F.B. "Stop Playin' (The Street Mixtape) (Hosted by Sire)"

Reviewed on 5.27.2010 (Review #476)




Without takin’ a break, I now come to my 2nd review of tha day (476th overall)! This one iz for C.F.B., who I believe promoted this mixtape on my comments and told me to check it out. It’s from last year and it’s tha “Stop Playin’ (The Street Mixtape) (Hosted by Sire)” mixtape right chea; lookin’ forward!! Start Time: 11:18 AM | End Time: 12:25 PM


Quick Note: I rate each song from 1.0 – 5.0; each rating iz my own opinion!! I only please myself wit my ratings!! I don’t care how lyrical you are! As long as it’s jammin’ enough for me to like it! I look for beats, then vocals and then lyrics. To determine my favorites, I will differ tha 4.0 ratings (if a song gets at least a 4.0 rating from me, I love it already. If at least a 4.6 rating, I pretty much REALLY LOVE it as it’s considered “mindblowin’” when I hear it) so any song can earn up to a maximum of a 5.0 rating. Anything I type before “ >>> ” iz what I’m sayin’ before I listen to tha song. Anything after I type “ >>> ” iz what I think of tha song while I’m listening to it.

© 2010 CD Review (Review #476) reviewed on 5.27.2010 by FrankieThaLuckyDog. Other than tha main artist or affiliated people with tha main artist, this review iz to not be used in anyone else’s words!

Source (Where I Got Tha CD From): http://www.datpiff.com/CFB_Stop_Playin_Mixtape.m58147.html


01. Sire Says Intro
Lookin’ forward ta hearin’ what he gon “say,” ya dig! >>> Oh, so it’s Dink & Big Hype as a group right chea; interestin’… Thanx fa tha gutta intro, Sire! My Rating: N/A


02. “Stop Playin’” Feat. Trey Deuce & Sire
This looks like it gon be some gutta shit; lemme find out! >>> DEFINITELY feelin’ this beat intro right chea!! Makes me REALLY anticipated ta hear tha rhymes!! Tha 1st verse iz here and it sounds pretty hot; DEFINITELY 100% street material right chea!! Even down to tha “fire up tha dro, let’s blow. Roll up tha pill, let’s roll” part; DEFINITELY givin’ this a BIG PLUS!!! Tha 1st verse just REALLY made me be in a GR8 mood for these reviewz right chea, ya dig!! Tha hook sounds good for tha fakerz and haterz; DEFINITELY, they gotta “stop playin’!” Tha “heartbeat of tha street” iz on tha 2nd verse here wit some REAL TIGHT rhymes!! DEFINITELY “Tha Louisiana Pit” material right chea; my radio show! You KNOW this shit’s OFFICIAL when y’all come through wit your A+ game to tha fullest!! Let’s see what this 3rd verse gon be all about… More shit for tha fakerz/haterz! Watch out for Mr. “Short-Tempered!” Also, “a nightmare!” Haterz, move out da way!! Just like he said, “Pack yo bags and get tha fuck outta dis business!” My Rating: 4.9


03. “Do Ya Thang” Feat. Big Koont
You KNOW I gon luv err-body on tha features; I fux wit err-body, ya dig! DEFINITELY lookin’ forward ta dis one!! >>> Keepin’ tha production NICE and HOT, ya dig!! Tha hook sounds good here; can’t complain ‘bout it. It’s startin’ ta sound addictin’ wit tha title, ya dig! Tha 1st verse iz Big Hype and he’s strictly keepin’ it street right chea; likin’ tha flow fa dis joint also. Tha 2nd verse iz Koont and he has an aight verse here… It’s gettin’ betta wit tha “LRG” and tha “dreads hang;” thumbs up ta him havin’ “dreads!” Hope we click in wit dis music business shit soon, ya dig! Now, tha 3rd verse iz here and it looks like it’s a REAL feel good-type of verse right chea! From tha “pop a skittle” to tha “Coogi down” shit, this DEFINITELY a good feelin’ right chea for this undaground Louisiana Rap shit! My Rating: 4.5


04. “In Da Hood” Feat. Sire
You KNOW this’ll be HOT!! Keep tha HOT SHIT comin’!!! >>> LOL, Sway in tha beginning? What’s this? Oh, switchin’ up to jacked beats wit dis “I’m In The Hood” beat… Horrible memories wit these times so let’s see if y’all can make it betta… Tha 1st verse’s DEFINITELY “out chere,” so dat’s a plus! Glad he gave a shout out ta “Slugga;” Gremlins represent! Good “hood”-type shit right chea, ya dig! Tha 2nd verse has a REAL, REAL HOT start here: “I’m in da hood wit my niggaz, you know what it iz. Sellin’ dope, smokin’ weed, drankin’ goose and poppin’ pillz!” My attention’s DEFINITELY focused here; I like tha “gunplay” parts and tha “will I stop? Hmm… Maybe one day” part; SO FUCKIN’ TIGHT for tha 2nd verse!!!!! Luv, luv, LUVED it!!! Tha 3rd verse has good shit goin’ on here; it’s just STREET, STREET, STREET when it comes ta dis shit!!! My Rating: 4.7


05. “Black Gloves”
This an interestin’ title; you KNOW I gon luv dis one too!! >>> Anotha lil’ intro here; how random here… Kinda long; it took it all tha way to tha :33 mark… Sire on tha intro here? Tha beat REAL, REAL HOT right chea!!! Y’all got tha production game on lock to tha fullest!!! Tha hook iz a gangsta-type hook right chea; DEFINITELY a BIG PLUS; I LUV write dat word in caps: “DEFINITELY!!!” I feel like I write it at elast 4x in a song review if I just LUV tha song!!! DEFINITELY (lol) feelin’ all tha gangsta-ass “black gloves, black mask” shit in tha hook!! Tha 1st verse sounds like it keepin’ it gangsta to tha bone right chea on dis REALLY HOT beat!! I can just imagine what it’s like ta be in “black gloves” and a “black mask;” what would tha scene really look like? I prolly would neva know but it’s GR8 ta hear about it, ya dig! Tha 2nd verse DEFINITELY gutta here wit tha “put it in tha bag” shit and even ta add tha words “bruh” and “dawg” DEFINITELY makes dis shit $ OFFICIAL!! $ RAW-ASS song right chea!!! I might even like dis betta than tha 1st song on here, which means dat dis’ll beat it in a tie-breaker! My Rating: 4.9


06. “Receipt”
Sorry, tha “ie” iz “ei;” “e” before “i” most of tha time. Anyway, looks like a familiar title so let’s see… >>> Yup, it iz familiar since it’s tha Lil’ Wayne beat from ’05. Tha rappin’s good here for tha streetz; DEFINITE plus here! I’m surprised DatPiff kept dis but got rid of Song 11? Usually, if tha original version’s sample’s in it, it’s usually removed… But yea, good job on tha 1st verse, since it’s DEFINITELY for tha streetz right chea!! Tha 2nd verse sounds like it’s really showin’ how ta really “hold on to your receipt!” Tha reason iz ‘cause y’all (and your streetz) are SO GUTTA ta where y’all gotta keep doin’ ya thang, cautiously! My Rating: 4.2


07. “U Ain’t ‘Bout Dat” Feat. Sire
I KNOW y’all gon REALLY hold dis one down too!! >>> “Hittman laced tha track?” Cool, anticipatin’ beat tag right there; I hope I spelled his name right (wit two “t”s; just a guess). Anyway, I’m REALLY feelin’ tha “bow, bow” shit in tha beginning of tha beat right chea; DEFINITELY a REAL HOT production to tha fullest!! Tha hook sounds like it raw and once again, for tha fakerz/haterz!! Bobbin’-your-head-type shit right chea; soundin’ GR8 on tha 1st verse wit dis street shit! Tha 2nd verse sounds good wit Sire on it; “Y-H Ent.” representin’ to tha fullest!! He really got dis shit held down right chea; it’s just dat tightness!! Tha 3rd verse sounds like it gon be “from tha parkin’ lot” to anotha destination; it’s REAL RAW right chea!! Nice job wit tha 3rd verse; ALWAYS a pleasure ta have a collaboration like dis! From tha production to tha feature to tha two of y’all, it’s DEFINITELY HOT right chea!! My Rating: 4.6


08. “U Still Fake”
A short song so it must be a freestyle; what will dis sound like? >>> It does sound jacked here and it looks like it’s anotha anthem for those dat aren’t real! Tha flow sounds a lil’ off from tha beat here; kinda sounds a lil’ fast for dis beat… Tha 2nd part on this iz pretty good too; just good, street rappin’ ova a beat here. My Rating: 3.8


09. “I Get High” Feat. Lil’ Tu & Sire
Looks like a GR8 collab! Glad Lil’ Tu’s back here!! >>> Tha beat sounds non-original at first but it’s good for a start, ya dig! I like tha “continuous smokin’” on tha 1st verse here; you TOO inta it, ya dig! I think I gon really wind up likin’ dis ‘cause of its topic/title!! Tha hook sounds good; definitely LUVIN’ tha 2nd ½ of it!! I REALLY gon hold you down, ya dig!! Sire’s on tha 2nd verse and he focused when it comes ta supplyin’ these streetz and gettin’ loaded too! Tha 3rd verse iz here and it sounds like it’s dedicated (smokin’ wise) to those not around. I still neva got why people blow shit ta those not alive… Anyway, I like how they said, “toke,” ‘cause dat’s my boy outta G-Lane, Toke! “This Rap shit flow deeper than shark shit;” crazy-ass shit!!! “I’m blowin’ weed in tha darkness, fa real!” DEFINITELY “fa real,” ya dig!! Y’all DEFINITELY too sick wit it!!! My Rating: 4.8


½time: Well, this mixtape’s DEFINITELY REAL HOT right chea!! Y’all sound like y’all a family when it comes ta dis Rap shit and dat’s a DEFINITE plus!! Gotta have tha family vibe in your bones!! Keep this HOT-ASS street shit up ‘cause tha average CD rating right now iz at a WHOPPIN’ 4.6!!!!!


10. Sire Says Intermission
LOL @ tha “says;” I like dat. Let’s see what he has ta “say” dis time, lol. >>> Yea, I’m DEFINITELY lookin’ forward ta all these projects comin’ soon; Lil’ Tu, I see you!! My Rating: N/A


11. “Can’t Stop Me” Feat. Lil’ Tu
This tha missin’ song and it looks like Jadakiss’s song on tha title? *Checks DatPiff’s reasoning link* Yup, dat’s why it was removed… They only givin’ me 30 seconds so let’s see… >>> Tha rappin’s good; nothin’ much ta say about it though… My Rating: 3.4


12. “Strong Survive”
Let’s keep dis shit goin’! Now, it’s just tha two of y’all once again! >>> Tha beat start sounds Floridian and kinda long for a start here… I think tha beat’s good and tha street content’s on point here. Nice job wit tha 1st verse here and tha hook’s on dat true shit right chea; you KNOW I gon “survive” ‘cause I just keep it consistent!! Tha 2nd verse didn’t even sound like it transitioned to tha 2nd verse (‘cause of tha consistent voice) but tha rhymes sound pretty good still… Tha verse was split up as there was a 2nd ½ of tha 2nd verse too…; pretty good once again. My Rating: 4.0


13. “Advanced”
Looks like a good title but only 2:22 on tha length so I’m assumin’ dis just a freestyle… >>> Tha beat’s okay; kinda not a Louisiana style but a GR8 freestylin’-type of beat! Tha 1st verse sounds pretty crazy wit tha rappin’; str8 gangsta shit right chea!! REALLY feelin’ how tha flow sounds and I’m glad y’all advanced wit dis shit; look @ your ratings!! Tha 2nd verse holdin’ down this beat right here too! “Ready ta do damage;” dat’s what you’re doin’ to those dat are hatin’ on y’all! My Rating: 4.4


14. “Talk It Over”
This looks like a jacked beat on tha title (and tha length’s only 2:48) so let’s see what’s up here… >>> Ahh, tha female sample in tha beat… Not really likin’ tha beat when it’s like dat; too plain. Tha 1st verse just okay for me; not likin’ how this beat’s soundin’ annoyin’ while I’m tryin’ ta hear y’all rap… Yuck @ tha hook; disgustin’!! Good thing it’s short though; I rather it’ve been 0.00 seconds long though. Tha 2nd verse a lil’ betta here… I don’t have much ta say about it but yuck @ dat hook… Tha sample’s just… yuck material. Tha 3rd verse sounds on tha same level as tha 2nd verse here for me… My Rating: 2.8


15. “Sayin’ Nothin’” Feat. Trey Deuce
This looks familiar; almost looks like “Stop Playin’” on tha ID so let’s see what dis iz all about! You KNOW I’m lookin’ forward!! >>> Pretty good beat here and tha rappin’s good right chea; y’all sound good on dis shit right chea. Likin’ all these hood/street-type rhymes when it comes ta hearin’ undaground Rap music! Tha 2nd verse knows what it iz for tha real right chea! “Stingin’ like New Orleans Hornets;” gr8 way ta end tha 2nd verse off! Tha 2nd verse kept it just as consistent as tha 1st verse so dat’s a plus! Let’s see how tha 3rd verse’ll be… Good shit so far! “I fuck wit tha chickens and then go back to makin’ cabbage;” gotta feel these street rhymes!! My Rating: 4.5


16. “So Smooth”
Not sure what I gon expect… >>> LOL, only 1:45 on tha length and yea, I can “feel this one” right chea (Estelle/Sean Paul “Come Over” beat). This iz tha 1st time I heard someone rap on this beat and it sounds good; y’all keepin’ it “smooth” right chea. LOL @ “tha bad bitches smokin’ weed;” weedful, lol! My Rating: 3.9


17. “Catch Me”
Anotha title dat looks like it’ll be jacked or somethin’… >>> It sounds like it but I’m not sure; I’m just stereotypin’. Anyway, this sounds hot; likin’ this “catch me—catch me if you can when I’m dippin’ from tha cops” sample in tha hook! Tha beat’s cool here too; I like tha organ! Not bad on tha rappin’ here on tha 1st verse; looks like it’s “trouble” when it comes to tha content here… Almost sounds like shit my brotha’s dealin’ wit or somethin’… Some hectic/good drivin’ goin’ on here in tha 2nd verse… Tha rappin’s good but I dunno what ta say… I still like tha “steady tokin’” part (just like tha previous time it was said)! My Rating: 3.8


18. “Let Us In The Door” Feat. Y.H. Ent.
This looks good on tha ID; tha whole Young-N-Hustlin’ Entertainment in tha buildin’ here on tha feature!! Talk about tha length: 6:22!! >>> Tha beat’s good here and tha intro sounds good for a start. LOL, tha 1st verse iz REALLY off-beat or iz it still an intro? Okay, it was tha intro still; nearly sounded like there was rappin’ wit tha way it was tryin’ ta be on beat or somethin’… Tha actual 1st verse has good shit goin’ on here; I like tha shit goin’ on here as it’s “unquittable!” Tha hook sounds good; DEFINITELY representin’ right chea to tha fullest! This a Y.H. anthem to tha fullest! I like tha 2nd verse’s start wit tha “dawg” shit and all dat. Even though dis beat’s ova six minutes, it sounds familiar (like somethin’ from tha 2003 – 2004 times for some reason). Nice job wit this 2nd verse as there’s buku amounts of representations goin’ on! More “dawg” shit comin’ through here wit tha start of tha 3rd verse; good shit! Looks like some in-your-face-type shit goin’ on here in tha scene as it sounds like people tryna get in your face or somethin’. I like how tha 3rd verse was delivered; street shit to tha fullest! Let’s see what we got for tha 4th verse… This time, it’s Sire and he has a crown on his head by tha way he rappin’. I like tha “we gon swim or we gon sank;” DEFINITELY “swimmin’” in money in my opinion!! Now dat tha 4th verse’s ova, there’s 1:35 left; will there be a 5th verse? I hope so! Shit yea, a 5th verse comin’ through NICE and RAW!! I like tha “get off my nuts!!” shit ta start tha verse off!! “A full force on tha track;” agreed! “I bring 16 bars of phenomenal torture;” CRAZY shit ta end dis shit off!! REAL GLAD there was a 5th verse; it was DEFINITELY worth it!! LOL @ tha gurl at tha end; of COURSE, it was “hot!” My Rating: 4.4


19. Sire Says Outro
Let’s see what we got here… I gotta call Sire up ta remind him about his CD he ‘pose ta send me in tha mail… for tha past 3.5 months? LOL? He tol’ me he was on point wit it… I guess he can send dis one too! >>> DEFINITELY “lookin’ out fa Lil’ Tu” soon; you KNOW I said it when you said it before, ya dig! My Rating: N/A


Overall: DEFINITELY HOT shit right chea, ya dig!! Glad y’all held dis bitch down to tha fullest wit your GR8 rhymes and GR8 content!! Keep these streetz burnin’, ya dig!!


Rankings (according to my ratings):

16. “Talk It Over” 2.8
15. “Can’t Stop Me” Feat. Lil’ Tu 3.4
14. “U Still Fake” 3.8
13. “Catch Me” 3.8
12. “So Smooth” 3.9
11. “Strong Survive” 4.0
10. “Receipt” 4.2
09. “Advanced” 4.4
08. “Let Us In The Door” Feat. Y.H. Ent. 4.4
07. “Sayin’ Nothin’” Feat. Trey Deuce 4.5
06. “Do Ya Thang” Feat. Big Koont 4.5
05. “U Ain’t ‘Bout Dat” Feat. Sire 4.6
04. “In Da Hood” Feat. Sire 4.7
03. “I Get High” Feat. Lil’ Tu & Sire 4.8
02. “Stop Playin’” Feat. Trey Deuce & Sire 4.9
01. “Black Gloves” 4.9


Average CD Rating Review:

Total Score: 67.6
Total Songs: / 16
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Average CD Rating: 4.2

Review #406: Sire "Back 2 Da Business (Hosted by One-i)"

Reviewed on 4.18.2010 (Review #406)




It’s FrankieThaLuckyDog again. ‘Bout ta do a review for my boy Sire, who fucks wit One-i, ya dig! His mixtape, “Back 2 Da Business (Hosted by One-i),” I finna review right now. I was ‘pose ta have it in tha mail but I don’t know where his mind’s at right now ‘cause it’s been ova two months and he had a trusting voice, lol. Anyway, here goes my review for it. Start Time: 6:04 PM | End Time: 7:21 PM


Quick Note: I rate each song from 1.0 – 5.0; each rating iz my own opinion!! I only please myself wit my ratings!! I don’t care how lyrical you are! As long as it’s jammin’ enough for me to like it! I look for beats, then vocals and then lyrics. To determine my favorites, I will differ tha 4.0 ratings (if a song gets at least a 4.0 rating from me, I love it already. If at least a 4.6 rating, I pretty much REALLY LOVE it as it’s considered “mindblowin’” when I hear it) so any song can earn up to a maximum of a 5.0 rating. Anything I type before “ >>> ” iz what I’m sayin’ before I listen to tha song. Anything after I type “ >>> ” iz what I think of tha song while I’m listening to it.

© 2010 CD Review (Review #406) reviewed on 4.18.2010 by FrankieThaLuckyDog. Other than tha main artist or affiliated people with tha main artist, this review iz to not be used in anyone else’s words!

Source (Where I Got Tha CD From): http://www.datpiff.com/Hosted_By_One-i_Sire_Back_2_Da_Buisness.m46027.html


01. Intro (One-i Speaks)
Lettin’ ya boy One-i do tha talkin’ for tha beginning, huh? That’s watz good… I know he’ll put you in tha right direction! >>> LOL @ One-i’s laugh! Likin’ tha intro ta where it’ll give me anticipation!! My Rating: N/A


02. “Back 2 Da Business Freestyle”
It’s a freestyle? What beat will it be? >>> I don’t know this beat but it makes me feel anticpiated ta hear you on this shit, ya dig! “You get fold like a folder;” good shit! DEFINITELY feelin’ tha content on this shit too! My Rating: 4.4


03. “99 Problems” Feat. Big Koont
That title iz too stereotypical for me… I hope it ain’t tha Jay-Z beat… >>> Good thing it ain’t; original beat (heard tha tag in tha beginning)! Nice intro from One-i and you doin’ ya thang on tha hook here. It should’ve been a different numba but as long as it wasn’t tha exact quote, then it’s fine. Nice job wit tha 1st verse here… You got some good shit you spittin’. And although it’s #3 on tha CD, already, there’s a newbie on tha feature! This Big Koont dude sounds cool on this shit; I’m likin’ his verse right here on tha 2nd verse! He got a good voice fa this Rap shit! For tha 3rd verse, you’re spittin’ good street shit right here! Thumbs up ta this joint as it feels like it neva ends! Likin’ tha beat outro a lot too! My Rating: 4.5


04. “Come Up” Feat. Hype
Yes! Anotha feature right chea! Lookin’ forward ta hearin’ this one too! >>> Likin’ tha sound to tha start! Sounds like an engine iz startin’ or somethin’, lol. Tha hook just came outta nowhere and it sounds good; tha title sounds cool dat it comes outta nowhere too. Really feelin’ tha street vibe to tha 1st verse; you doin’ tha damn thang here! You always have me anticipated wit these new jointz! I’m hearin’ tha 2nd verse now and tha Hype dude iz on tha 2nd verse, really comin’ through wit some tight shit!! GR8 street shit and speakin’ of “shit,” I like how he said, “Shit,” at 2:20! He ‘bout his “business” just like this mixtape! My Rating: 4.4


05. “‘Round And ‘Round” Feat. Tweeday
What could this be? Again, you got anotha feautre so I’m lookin’ forward!! >>> Ooh, a New Orleans vibe in tha beginning! Tha hook iz cool; y’all doin’ it nice fa err-body here!! Tha 1st verse sounds cool; good shit! Nothin’ but energetic shit here and that’s always a plus! Dat newbie, Tweeday, iz on tha 2nd verse and again, you have anotha featured artist focused and doin’ tha damn thang on tha track to tha fullest!! Gotta luv tha title part! All tha shit goin’ on in tha 3rd verse also iz catchy fa this song; good shit! I dunno about One-i’s ending though wit tha “anti-social” and tha “throwin’ bills…” My Rating: 4.4


06. “Loot And Dollaz” Feat. Hype & Lil’ Tu
Looks like this gon be a GR8 sequel!! >>> LOL @ tha quick start here wit tha screwed sample. Almost sounds like “Dallas” in tha hook, lol. You sound like you always focused on tha 1st verse; good job wit your focus! Tha 2nd verse sounds cool; almost makes tha title turn into “Smoking & Lighters,” lol. Tha 3rd verse voice gets me anticipated fa tha rest of this verse… Pretty good shit here; definitely feelin’ it! My Rating: 4.3


07. “Now That It’s Over” Feat. S.J. Lacey
Anotha feature? Shit yea!! Let’s see what we got here!! >>> Intro beat wasn’t that anticipating fa me; I have a feelin’ tha featured person iz gonna be a singer. However, I seem like I have more interest now dat I’m hearin’ you wit tha real lyrics in tha 1st verse. Tha hook sounds fucked up…; no comment. Tha 2nd verse at least has more good shit from you. I’m hearin’ tha S.J. dude on tha 2nd hook talkin’, complimentin’ you. I’m lookin’ forward ta him as he sounds cool…! Hearin’ him now on tha 3rd verse and he DEFINITELY has a gr8 voice fa Rap music!! Thumbs-tha fuck-up! His, “They used ta tease me… / But, I made it…,” line was DEFINITELY true right there!! I’m a multi-tasked hit (as I say in my latest song); NOBODY can compare or equal tha success I bring!! My Rating: 3.7


08. “Take It Outside” Feat. Hype & Dink
Luvin’ this title fa some reason… I KNOW it gon cause a NICE mark on this mixtape review!!! >>> I think tha beat intro might equal my anticipation here!! GR8 vibe here and tha hook DEFINITELY on sum gangsta shit; good job anticipatin’ me!! I like how tha 1st verse comes through on this shit; nothin’ but hotness wit tha gutta shit! Tha hook almost sounds a lil’ off beat but you know it’s still good! Tha 2nd verse DEFINITELY raw wit tha lyrics!! Keep this HOT shit comin’ along; you KNOW I luv how y’all come through on songs!! Tha 3rd verse sounds aight fa a start but it added some jiggalatin’-type lyrics so you KNOW I definitely feel it! I think someone else hopped onto tha 2nd ½ of tha 3rd verse? Now that’s tha decent part but still contributes good. My Rating: 4.6


09. “Paper Chasin’” Feat. Lil’ Cali
Ooh, look at dis collab; thumbs up ta Da Gremlins! Let’s see how GR8 this iz!! >>> One-i on tha intro… After 34 seconds, you came through finally, Sire! Nice job, One-i, for tha intro but where’s tha anticipation in tha beat? Sounds kinda plain… This sounds more like a freestyle than a song so it’s aight…; good rhymes from you though, Sire. Even One-i mentioned “Da Gremlins;” good shit. And here iz Cali on tha 2nd verse… He sounds betta wit more catchy rhymes and a good/different voice fa this. LOL @ One-i on tha outro this time; he came through exposin’!! My Rating: 3.6


10. “Hand Ova Fist” Feat. Clent
Keepin’ tha collaborations comin’ along!! Lookin’ forward still!!! >>> Cool beat this time and tha hook sounds cool too! I hear tha title in its entirety and I like tha “ova” theme! Nice job on tha hook and tha 1st verse sounds pretty good from you. You know you doin’ tha damn thang here! DEFINITELY felt your rhymes this time! Anotha cool start to a new feature here on tha 2nd verse (Clent)! Keep bringin’ tha newbies to tha table, ya dig! Anotha good voice…; tha lyrics are aight here (nothin’ really ta quote) but it flows good. Nice job wit tha beat outro (and tha long fade-out) but I prolly could’ve seen One-i do tha outro on here… My Rating: 4.3


½time: Comin’ through wit consistent heat, Sire!! Nice job wit this mixtape so far and I know you on tha grind right now wit prolly anotha one!! Tha average CD rating iz currently a 4.2 so you KNOW there’s NOTHIN’ but QUALITY comin’ from this mixtape!!


11. One-i Speaks (Intermission)
He’s 40 seconds too late (as he missed tha outro to tha last song)… >>> Tell me anotha laugh from him… I prolly could’ve seen a laugh (prolly tha listener) after tha “7th inning stretch” or somethin’, lol. My Rating: N/A


12. “Fine Azz” Feat. G-Ryde
Shit yea, a gremlin!! Although he ain’t wit Da Gremlins anymore, I know he gon be an a$$et to tha fullest (wit dolla signs in tha word “asset”)!! >>> And One-i’s here on tha intro… Tha beat DEFINITELY sounds HOT here!! REAL NICE job on tha production!! Reminds me of tha Savage/Young Ready/Dirty Harry “Pussazz” song wit all tha “___ azz” parts after every line on tha hook! This iz on anotha level and sounds hot still! Nice job wit tha 1st verse, Sire; doin’ tha damn thang here!! Here’s my boy G-Ryde on tha 2nd verse, “azztized” wit this club, lol! Nice job wit this collaboration right here, no matter how quick it went by! My Rating: 4.5


13. “Make It Work For You Freestyle”
What beat was this? Thought I saw this title one day… >>> Didn’t catch onto what tha beat was right away so I’ll have ta think… Looks like a Juelz Santana title… You sound good on this beat though for freestyle; thumbs up ta your street shit! Thumbs up to tha “Red Monkeys saggin’” and tha “dragon” part! You did a nice job on this lil’ beat here! Glad you attributed to tha outro too! My Rating: 4.2


14. “My Team” Feat. Lil’ Tu
Lil’ Tu’s back up in this bitch! Let’s see what y’all got now!! >>> Anything could happen wit tha beat start but wit Lil’ Tu on it, I think I gon anticipate it, especially since you got tha intro on lock! As soon as tha 1st verse started, there was no transition wit tha beat and tha way it sounds… Thumbs up ta you bein’ “higher than Rudolph,” lol! Where’s tha transition wit tha beat? Your 1st verse was nice, as you came through tough on tha track. However, tha beat ain’t changin’… It makes me think of this bein’ a freestyle but its length iz regular… I don’t rememba hearin’ Lil’ Tu on tha previous song he was on on here but this time, he DEFINITELY sounds SO FUCKIN’ anticipatin’!!! Luvin’ how he’s comin’ through wit this raw-ass-gangsta-ass shit!! REAL NICE collaboration here!! I also liked tha gunshot ending! My Rating: 4.4


15. “Blowin’ Killah” Feat. Hype & Dink
This should be REAL, REAL TIGHT!!! Anotha collaboration!!! >>> LOL @ One-i again on tha intro. Tha “sunglasses on” part sounded catchy. This beat may be not an anticipatin’ beat but wit tha title/topic, it sounds gr8 wit what y’all spittin’! Tha hook pretty cool wit how it sounds… I like how tha 1st verse iz delivered; “YH style!!” Nice job feelin’ cool, Sire! Tha dude on tha hook iz on tha 2nd verse here, very “ma’fucka’d” out wit err-thang, lol! Sounded a lil’ long wit tha 2nd verse but you know if it’s a collaboration, it fits! Tha 3rd verse iz here and it also sounds like it fits wit this song. Not much on tha “tight” feel but still a good vibe. Very focused wit tha “money makin’” in tha 3rd verse here I hear. Oh no, a minute beat outro? Why so long? Y’all should’ve cut it… Shit no, it was 26 seconds of silence dat fucked up tha length… My Rating: 3.9


16. One-i Speaks
LOL, anotha intermission! >>> Yea One-i, you do “talk a lot” on here, but I wanna hear what you gotta say! Yea, there’s so many peeps! My Rating: N/A


17. “Crank It Up” Feat. Dink
You KNOW I luv this title ‘cause of tha David Banner/Static song from ’04! This should be on dat hot shit!! >>> Tha beat intro gives me a TIGHT Southern vibe!! Tha hook sounds good; gotta luv tha “crank it up, crank it up” parts! “Crankin’ up” tha vibe on tha 1st verse here; you know how you do, Sire! Nothin’ but feel-good-type shit here; “dancin’ on your sun-roof!” How can you not like this song? You’re on tha 2nd verse also, keepin’ tha transportation movin’ all tha time! Here comes dat boy Dink on tha 3rd verse, always “ready fa dat action!” Good job spittin’ and contributin’ to this song; nothin’ but consistentness here!! My Rating: 4.5


18. “Livin’ My Life” Feat. Young Don
This one’s a lil’ shorter… What’ll it be like wit this featured person on it? >>> Okay start but luckily, it gets spooky in tha beat so I’m gonna enjoy this!! You have a pretty good hook here; gotta luv tha spooky-type beat wit tha shit you spittin’! Tha 1st verse has some good shit in it; nothin’ but hotness!! I hear tha featured dude comin’ through talkin’ in tha 2nd hook; let’s see what he ‘bout… More motivational-type lyrics! Boy, he’ll “snap like a gator!” Shit to tha yea! I also liked tha double “shit” part (as one ended a sentence and started a sentence), lol! Nice job wit this collaboration! Young Don, what up?!? My Rating: 4.1


19. “Stick To The Code” Feat. Trey D
Yes, ANOTHA feature!!! GR8 title too wit this shit!! >>> Oh, I know this beat (ain’t it tha “Louie Bag” beat). I had thought there was a similar beat that sounded like this that was an original beat but either way, it sounds like “Louie Bag” (wit added sounds) ta me. I thought at first tha hook sounded like tha last song’s title but it’s new; good shit! I like tha title here and you doin’ a nice job wit tha 1st verse here! You DEFINITELY “focused” to tha fullest! Damn, ALREADY up to tha featured artist!!! Let’s see what he’s got… Shit-fuckin’-yea; ANOTHA tight rapper on tha comeup!!! I show BUKU LUV ta all these rappers so you KNOW I luv hearin’ ‘em!! He’s got a good voice fa this shit and tha rhymes are cool too! He prolly be in these streetz heavy, promotin’ tha shit outta himself and all y’all at YH & MVP Ent.! My Rating: 4.4


20. “Do What It Do” Feat. Lil’ Tu
This might be tha final song but if it iz, at least Lil’ Tu’s featured on it ta end it off!! I gotta add him and tha rest of all these guys on my MySpace!!! >>> Almost sounds like P!nk “Most Girls” wit tha beat sounds in tha beginning and then, it got to a hot point; good job wit tha production again!! Cool dark beat and you doin’ tha damn thang wit tha hook here; DEFINITELY “does what it does!” You DEFINITELY “standin’ like a tree” when it comes ta this shit! You official wit it so you KNOW you deserve tha proper respect!! Let’s see what tha big dawg has ta offer on tha 2nd verse… Cool-ass voice here and tha rhymes pretty good fa a start! He spittin’ some real street shit here fa y’all fakerz!! My Rating: 4.3


21. Outro (Young Don)
LOL @ tha feature on tha outro (only seconds long)… >>> Not exactly a feature; just him. Nice lil’ message here fa y’all that enjoyed this CD! You KNOW I did!! ‘Preciate tha outro! My Rating: N/A


Overall: DEFINITELY HOT SHIT right here, my boy!! I’ma let DatPiff know so they can see who they fuckin’ wit!! Keep up tha gr8 work and tell all your featured people about me! Keep makin’ dem quality tracks and collaborations!!


Rankings (according to my ratings):

17. “Paper Chasin’” Feat. Lil’ Cali 3.6
16. “Now That It’s Over” Feat. S.J. Lacey 3.7
15. “Blowin’ Killah” Feat. Hype & Dink 3.9
14. “Livin’ My Life” Feat. Young Don 4.1
13. “Make It Work For You Freestyle” 4.2
12. “Hand Ova Fist” Feat. Clent 4.3
11. “Loot And Dollaz” Feat. Hype & Lil’ Tu 4.3
10. “Do What It Do” Feat. Lil’ Tu 4.3
09. “‘Round And ‘Round” Feat. Tweeday 4.4
08. “Back 2 Da Business Freestyle” 4.4
07. “Stick To The Code” Feat. Trey D 4.4
06. “Come Up” Feat. Hype 4.4
05. “My Team” Feat. Lil’ Tu 4.4
04. “Fine Azz” Feat. G-Ryde 4.5
03. “99 Problems” Feat. Big Koont 4.5
02. “Crank It Up” Feat. Dink 4.5
01. “Take It Outside” Feat. Hype & Dink 4.6


Average CD Rating Review:

Total Score: 72.5
Total Songs: / 17
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Average CD Rating: 4.3

Review #339: One-i "2 Weeks Notice"

Reviewed on 12.04.2009 (Review #339)




It’s ya boy FrankieThaLuckyDog shakin’ back, ya dig. Got a lil’ dizzy and distracted (lol @ those D words, lol) before wit my uncle’s gurlfriend, as we were playin’ games online. Anyway, after a power nap, I’m back fa anotha review, ya heard me! Up next iz once again One-i, but by himself this time! Here goes my review fa One-i 2 Weeks Notice! Start Time: 9:17 PM | End Time: 10:28 PM


Quick Note: I rate each song from 1.0 – 5.0. Each rating iz my own opinion!! I only please myself with my ratings!! I don’t care how lyrical you are! As long as it’s jammin’ enough for me to like it! I look for beats, then vocals, and then lyrics. To determine my favorites, I will differ tha 4.0 ratings (if a song gets at least a 4.0 rating from me, I love it already. If at least a 4.6 rating, I pretty much REALLY LOVE it as it’s considered “mindblowin’” when I hear it) so any song can earn up to a maximum of a 5.0 rating. Anything I type before “ >>> ” iz what I’m sayin’ before I listen to tha song. Anything after I type “ >>> ” iz what I think of tha song while I’m listening to it.

© 2009 CD Review by FrankieThaLuckyDog. Other than tha main artist or affiliated people with tha main artist, this review iz to not be used in anyone else’s words!


01. “2 Weeks Notice Intro”
Looks like it ain’t just an intro but a song as well!! I KNOW you hold it down (just like you did wit Pigg on tha Anti-Social mixtape I previously reviewed), so you gon do tha damn thang once again as you have dropped BUKU SHIT throughout this year!!! >>> Again a DJ Scrap intro, lol. It sounds like it gon be a pretty good intro here wit tha cool beat, mixin’ and your gr8 rappin’. I like all tha raps you’re spittin’ on this intro here, filterin’ out tha dudes unda your status! LOL @ tha part wit tha “gurl wantin’ ta sit on your sausage!” Gr8 job wit this shit as you just spittin’ to tha fullest!! I like tha ending wit, “I be down in Hammond City where tha gangstaz roll!” My Rating: 4.2


02. “They Watching” Feat. Prince Blakk
You brought Mr. Blakk on tha track here… Let’s see how it rolls on this mixtape. >>> Good beat transition; almost couldn’t tell that it changed. You doin’ ya thang on tha 1st verse here, continuin’ where you left off from tha intro! Blakk sounds good on this hook this time, so thumbs up to tha hook. It sux ta hear about your “100 pills” story in tha beginnin’ of tha 2nd verse; fuckin’ snitches. Pretty good 2nd verse overall too. My Rating: 4.1


03. “Tell The Truth”
Looks like an anti-fake tellin’ song; lookin’ forward! >>> Keepin’ these beats jumpin’ here wit a nice intro as well as you on tha 1st verse doin’ tha damn thang! Sounds like you’re spittin’ cool lyrics about yourself in tha 1st verse; good job. Tha hook iz more on you tellin’ tha truth than anybody bein’ fake. A lil’ on tha simple side but it goes ‘cause it’s you. LOL @ 1:44; it sounded like a Pacman dyin’ sound in tha beat; nice! Tha 2nd verse sounds betta here wit tha lyrics; keep this shit up! My Rating: 4.2


04. “Thinkin’ ‘Bout”
What could you be “thinkin’ ‘bout” on this joint? >>> Tha intro of tha beat sounded a lil’ different, but it’s rollin’ pretty average so far. You spittin’ tha real shit on this one so once again, you get a plus! Tha hook iz a lil’ different since it’s just talkin’…; okay song so far. Tha 2nd verse iz more about you and tha Rap game wit what’s goin’ on; pretty good verse once again. Kinda on tha short side, but it’s okay. My Rating: 3.6


05. “Living It Up”
Looks like you gon have a blast on this joint? Let’s see how excited you are, lol. >>> Much betta beat/soundin’ on this one for a start! Sounds like tha strength based off tha Anti-Social CD!! Great job on tha hook (motivational type) and you’re DEFINITELY ready fa tha 1st verse!! You did ya thang on tha 1st verse and I was right about you soundin’ like you havin’ fun on this track. Nice job wit tha “havin’ fun” hook and gr8 beat! Tha 2nd verse sounded like it went by quick but it was gr8. Ooh, a 2 Toxic production iz comin’ up next! My Rating: 4.3
EDIT: Didn’t notice tha producer credit (Sinema). Thumbs up ta Sinema producin’!!


06. “Want It With Me”
Yup, a 2 Toxic production here; lookin’ forward ta hearin’! >>> Tha hook start sounds betta than tha first few seconds that played at tha end of tha last song. Sounds like catchy lyrics (wit a near Eminem flow here) on tha 1st verse; keep it comin’, One-i! Tha 2nd verse has nothin’ but gr8 lyrics fa this Rap shit, so you know you doin’ ya thang on tha tracks! My Rating: 4.3


07. “Excuse Me” Feat. Pigg & Lil’ Witness
Ooh, ya included this HOT joint on here!! Tha intro sounds good wit Pigg on it. Sounds like this gon be “huge soundin’” like a boulder! Tha hook sounds gr8 wit you on it; sounds like mixin’ in tha hook almost? Either way, it’s DEFINITELY watz good wit tha beat! Nice 2nd verse wit all tha “hella” parts, combin’ wit a “helicopter!” Tha end to tha 2nd verse was RAW wit tha “hospital” part; you a beast, One-i!! Here’s Witness, witnessin’ a REAL TIGHT verse as he spits it on tha 3rd verse!! I like tha early mixin’ at 2:58; REAL GR8 verse right here!! ANOTHA REAL GR8 endin’ to tha verse wit tha whole “battle” thing!! Glad y’all got tha “ending verse” formula of makin’ it standout!! My Current Rating: 4.4


08. “Here Comes Trouble”
LOL @ tha “grouch” Grouch (just kiddin’) producin’ this song! I’m actually lookin’ forward ta hearin’ what he got on tha beat for you! >>> Good beat and gr8 hook start from you; thumbs up! Nice start to tha 1st verse wit tha “pound/bass” part! Nice job wit dat 1st verse and now, hearin’ tha hook for tha 2nd time and it sounds REAL good wit tha beat! Tha rhymes in tha 2nd verse was REAL GOOD this time!! Catchy song right here from dat boy One-i!! My Rating: 4.3


½time: Looks like anotha REAL GR8 start here!! This iz good, but tha ratings are not shiftin’ that much; most of them are next to each otha so tha tracks ride nearly equally. As much as it does, it makes tha average CD rating currently a 4.2, lol! Keep up tha gr8 work on this mixtape!!


09. “As I Am”
This iz tha missin’ track (DatPiff removed it for it havin’ a part from an original or somethin’). Lemme see what this really iz… *Checks* I don’t see anything up wit tha title, so lemme click tha info (in tha folder) on why it’s missin’… *Clicks* Oh, it’s over an Asher Roth beat. Well, DatPiff’ll only let me hear 30 seconds, so let’s see what goes down… >>> This iz a gr8 beat for you ta rap on and you sound gr8 on it! Oh, I see why DatPiff took it off: Towards tha end of tha 30 second sample (like tha last 10 seconds), it’s tha hook to tha Asher Roth song so DatPiff nailed it. Either way, good job on this shit. My Rating: 4.1


10. One-i Speaks
…And now an intermission, lol! Let’s see what you got ta say, my boy! >>> Glad you did this mixtape in “2 weeks;” no wonder its title, lol. My Rating: N/A


11. “I Get It”
Ooh, a Vybe production; this should be FIYA!!! >>> I have ta say, “WOW,” to tha beginning start of tha beat!! Great, long beat intro and tha hook iz here, soundin’ REAL GOOD fa you! DEFINITELY a gr8 anthem here!! Nice job deliverin’ tha 1st verse; nothin’ but dat good shit here, ya dig!! Tha 2nd verse iz also soundin’ gr8 on this shit as you just enjoyin’ tha track wit tha fire you’re spittin’!! Gotta luv Vybe wit tha productions!! I gotta look on my iPod ta see which songs I have dat Vybe produced so it will show up in my iPod’s info! My Rating: 4.5


12. “Game Face” Feat. Lil’ Witness
Shiftin’ ova to a Prince Blakk production here! Lil’ Witness iz on tha feature, so I most DEFINITELY have ta prepare myself wit anticipation here, ya dig!! >>> Sounds like a slower/gr8 beat intro here. Ooh, Witness starts tha song off on tha 1st verse!! Gotta luv his flow; it’s REAL gr8 wit its pace and err-thang!! Tha beat sounds REAL GOOD at :56 wit tha synth!! This iz DEFINITELY sum tight shit fa a slower pace!! This iz a MEGA collaboration wit how it sounds, ya feel me! REAL NICE hook too; DEFINITELY catchy!! Here you are on tha 2nd verse and although it ain’t up ta Witness’s level, you KNOW you gotta spit some of your shit here, ya dig! I like tha, “get folded like a bad hand,” line; good shit! My Rating: 4.6


13. “Heartless” Feat. Jayroc
Finally, a Jayroc feature, lol! I felt like it took a ton of songs ta happen, lol! It should be pretty good so let’s see how y’all do fa only 2:24 on tha length! >>> LOL, wit tha short-ass length, I figured it was tha Kanye West beat. Surprised DatPiff didn’t take this off ‘cause of tha sample here and there, lol. Pretty good rappin’, so I’ll give you tha props. ROFL!!! Tha WHOLE ENTIRE hook iz on here from Kanye West and DatPiff left it!! I rather them leave tha Asher Roth song on here instead; I find it funny! They just seem random; WTF? As far as Jayroc on tha 2nd verse, he’s soundin’ okay/good on his verse. Somewhat fits for this song itself, lol. Also, lol @ tha gr8 cut off before tha original’s bridge part! Tha beat intro to tha next song sounds tight, includin’ how it ended on this! My Rating: 3.8


14. “Grinder” Feat. Big Shane
Ooh, look at this collab!! I wonder how this came about? I know Big Shane wants ta collab wit err-body in Louisiana and I’m sure y’all were glad ta connect!! Let’s see how good it iz!! >>> Whateva this beat iz, it’s pretty good fa this (no producer listed so it could be jacked?). Big Shane sounds good in tha hook! Nice job wit dat and now, it’s you on tha 1st verse. You sound pretty good on this beat so I guess it was meant fa y’all. Glad you, “on yo block like Tetris;” that was a NICE ending line to tha 1st verse, ya dig!! Mr. Shane on tha 2nd verse and he on his grind! He ALWAYS on tha grind, ya dig! Gr8 flow from him, doin’ tha damn thang on this track! Tha next beat comin’ up definitely sounds like a jacked beat, but I think I heard tha very last few seconds’s “sound” before (maybe on tha last CD I reviewed?). Let’s see what it’ll be… My Rating: 4.3


15. “Center Of Attention” Feat. Sire & Prince Blakk
Neva mind, this iz 100% new fa me, includin’ tha 1st time I’m hearin’ Sire on a track!! I talked ta him a lot earlier in tha year on MySpace, but his cell phone neva worked or somethin’ so we currently haven’t talked by phone yet. He really gots luv fa you, ya dig! WHP did tha track, so this should be tha DEFINITE “center of attention,” fa real!! >>> Gr8 start and once tha singin’ came in, I knew it was Prince Blakk right away. Gotta like his “yeah, dawg” singin’ part 2x, lol (sounded gr8 fa singin’)! I’m assumin’ my boy Sire iz on tha 1st verse; sounds gr8 fa this shit! If only I can get sum of his shit that’s out (if any iz out ‘cause I don’t have anything)… REAL GR8 flow on this TIGHT beat, doin’ tha damn thang!! He DEFINITELY gangsta wit it on tha track so you KNOW I got luv fa him all day, ya dig!!! You’re on tha 2nd verse, One-i, and it’s DEFINITELY anotha TIGHT verse right here, ya dig!! Nothin’ but RAW shit bein’ spit here to tha fullest!! Looks like I gon enjoy tha hook ‘til tha very end since it repeated a 2nd time! Sounds like an interestin’ start wit tha rain in tha beginning of tha next song… Ooh, and it’s a Vybe production!! My Rating: 4.6


16. “Puzzle” Feat. Smoke
I wonder who this Smoke dude iz… I thought I saw his name somewhere, but I guess he’s a newbie. Wit a REAL GR8 title here, let’s see how we do wit a 3:00 song wit Vybe on tha track!! >>> Yup, ANOTHA gr8 song based off tha 1st few seconds!! Gotta hit dat boy Vybe up and tell him how GR8 I am!! Oh wow, look at tha HELLA FAST rappin’ from Smoke on tha 1st verse!! REAL GR8 rapid-fire rhymin’ here!!! Nearly sounds like Lil’ Witness at 1st; it’s TOO GR8!!! You’re on tha 2nd verse and you’re much slower on tha rappin’ here. Either way, you sound good fa what you’re doin’ wit this Rap shit so keep all these GR8 tracks comin’!! My Rating: 4.5


17. 2 Weeks Notice Outro
Not a song this time, lol. But, thanx to all those previous songs, tha average CD rating creeped up!! Find out how it did afta I hear this outro!! >>> You DEFINITELY “shakin’ thangz up this year,” ya dig!! My bad fa bein’ SO FAR behind from reviewin’ this! I KNOW I should’ve reviewed this earlier in tha year, but it’s a GR8 time now, ESPECIALLY since I got tha radio show goin’ down fa undaground Louisiana Rap music! Keep up these GR8 mixtapes!!! My Rating: N/A


Overall: Quite ironic… Last time, it was a collaboration mixtape between you and Pigg. Now, tha start and end times of this review were both tha birthdayz of my dad and his wife, lol!! You just CAN’T AVOID ANYTHING that has ta do wit a collaboration One-i, lol!! Keep up tha gr8 work, or should I say me, ‘cause I ‘bout ta review more shit of your’s!! Just like Deal Or No Deal’s on tha “Million Dollar Mission,” I feel like I’m on my “One-i Review Mission,” lol!!


Rankings (according to my ratings):

15. “Thinkin’ ‘Bout” 3.6
14. “Heartless” Feat. Jayroc 3.8
13. “As I Am” 4.1
12. “They Watching” Feat. Prince Blakk 4.1
11. “Tell The Truth” 4.2
10. “2 Weeks Notice Intro” 4.2
09. “Here Comes Trouble” 4.3
08. “Living It Up” 4.3
07. “Want It With Me” 4.3
06. “Grinder” Feat. Big Shane 4.3
05. “Excuse Me” Feat. Pigg & Lil’ Witness 4.4
04. “I Get It” 4.5
03. “Puzzle” Feat. Smoke 4.5
02. “Game Face” Feat. Lil’ Witness 4.6
01. “Center Of Attention” Feat. Sire & Prince Blakk 4.6


Average CD Review:

Total Score: 63.8
Total Songs: / 15
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Average CD Rating: 4.3

Review #93: STS Records "The Payback: Who Gon Stop Us (Special Edition)"

Reviewed on 6.05.2008 (Review No. 93)

Watz good it's ya boy Frankie and by request, from my dude One-i, I got his mixtape wit STS Records called "The Payback". It's from 2006, so we gon have that "predicted hot" flava. Let's see what gon go on right here… Here's my review for STS Records "The Payback: Who Gon Stop Us (Special Edition)". Start Time: 11:20 PM | Video Game Playing: Donkey Kong Country 2 (Diddy's Kong Quest) (for Super Nintendo) (on my computer)


Disclaimer: I rate each song from 1.0 – 5.0; each rating iz my own opinion! I only please myself wit my ratings! I don’t care how lyrical you are, as long as it’s jammin’ enough for me to like it! I look for beats, then vocals, and then lyrics. To determine my favorites, I will differ tha 4.0 ratings. If a song gets at least a 4.0 rating from me, I love it already. If at least a 4.6 rating, I pretty much really love it, as it’s considered mindblowin’ when I hear it! Any song can earn up to a maximum of a 5.0 rating. Anything I type before “ >>> ” iz what I’m sayin’ before I listen to tha song; anything after I type “ >>> ” iz what I think of tha song while I’m listening to it. If you sound like anything too mainstream for me or have auto-tune in your vocals, I’m not buyin’ it!

© 2008 CD Review (Review #93) reviewed on 6.05.2008 by FrankieThaLuckyDog.

01. "DJ Scrap Intro"
And how should we start this off…? >>> I really, REALLY love tha intro wit all those HOT jointz fused in!! My Rating: N/A


02. "One-i Speaks"
Let's see what my dawg gots ta say right chea! >>> Good shit my boy. I'm definitely givin' you a call when I'm finished wit this review! Matter a'fact, I'm gonna give you a call right now and tellin' you I'm doin' this review (BTW, I got your number from tha contact info attached to this mixtape)! My Rating: N/A

Intermission: *Goes and calls One-i…* >>> Aight good 1st conversation at 1:35. You sound like a real cool dude brah. I'm definitely stayin' in touch wit you.


03. "Money In The Bank (Remix)" Feat. Cooley
Okay we got a remix here at least (instead of tha title just sayin' "Money In The Bank"). This should be interesting over tha "Money In The Bank" beat. I wonder how good this'll be for me… >>> Good start. Cooley nice, and 2nd verse nice too. I like tha Young Buck sample from "Money In The Bank" that was durin' tha hook. I like tha "Kanye West" line. My Rating: 3.9


04. "Shake Back" Feat. Sire Slim
Looks like it gon be a good one to me. I got a high AL (anticipation level) for it! Here we go! >>> It went right into it. Sounds tight, especially that hook wit all those "boy" parts at tha end of each line. A lil' short, but it's all good. I don't have to say much. I just really like it! My Rating: 4.4


05. "Flex Speaks"
Let's hear his 12 short seconds… >>> Good check-in. My Rating: N/A


06. "Take A Ezzy"
Questionable one here… Iz tha topic gon be about "takin' it easy"? Lemme find out! >>> I was right about that. I like that "locamotive" line in tha 1st verse! Sounds good so far. That sample in tha hook sounds kinda quiet. I don't mind it tho. I enjoyed everyone on this joint. Good shit. My Rating: 4.1


07. "One-i Speaks"
Yeah you're speakin' again! DEFINITELY lookin' forward to more of what you got to say my dawg! >>> Another good interlude by you! I hope you have a few more! Plus, I like how tha "Take A Ezzy" song sample iz playin' towards tha end. My Rating: N/A


08. "Up On The North"
Good title = High AL for me! >>> Good beat and good 1st verse so far!! As for tha dude on tha 2nd verse, yeah "put on your 'bauds." Definitely love when rappers talk about girbauds! They're my favorite pants (and sometimes shorts). Another good joint right here! My Rating: 4.3


09. "Diamond Speaks"
Let's hear da bidne$$. >>> I thought this Diamond was gonna be a girl 'cause that's what most "Diamond" names I've heard are. It's all good tho. This iz tha 1st dude named "Diamond" I've heard. Yeah good promotion message from Diamond. My Rating: N/A


10. "Go Dumb"
This has to be a good song since its title has a Louisiana theme in it (most of ya'll like to "go dumb" and get retarded)! >>> Good beat and great flowin' by tha 1st dude on this! 2nd dude (Jayroc) on tha 1st verse sounds good too! Great start! Good hook too. I think that's you dawg on tha 2nd verse (One-i). It iz. Good shit I really felt that verse! I'm glad you had tha whole verse and not ½. Oh good I hear "Push It" by Rick Ross at tha end! Looks good for tha No. 11 song since I really liked that song and wouldn't mind it be freestyled over (or re-done)! My Rating: 4.3


11. "Push It"
BTW One-i, tha more I hear you on this, tha more I'm in tha mood for this mixtape! You're fuckin' great! >>> Jayroc did his thang! Yeah One-i, "you're that sick!" I agree wit you on that dawg. You did yo fuckin' thang on this shit! Ya'll kept this shit jammin' all tha way! My Rating: 4.0


12. "Grew Up A Screw Up"
Two "jacked" ones in a row. I bet'cha "Push It" was better, but let's see this… >>> Lol @ tha clean instrumental… One-i, of course, you fuckin' did yo thang on tha 1st verse! Yeah tha "Push It" was better, but I give this credit too. My Rating: 3.8


½time: Real good shit right here! Always feel good enough to put it on my iPod! Gotta hear tha 2nd ½ to see if it's official! One-i you fuckin' tight!!


13. "It's Going Down"
A high AL on this… Good length too at 4:10! >>> I like how these jointz just start right away wit no intro. Did it just start at 0:56? *Rewinds it back* Not sure. It sounds more like it's fused wit tha last joint. Pretty good sample for that "it's goin' down tonight" part. 1st verse (I think if you consider it tha 1st after 0:56) sounded nice wit that H-Town feel. Good on tha 2nd verse for bumpin' Max Minelli!! Good shit right here! My Rating: 4.2


14. "Jayroc Speaks"
Let's hear what he's got to say… >>> Good message from Jayroc. My Rating: N/A


15. "The Payback"
Lemme hear this title track, explainin' why tha mixtape iz called this! >>> Like tha screwed sample and nice beat! Great 1st verse by Jayroc! This iz a jam right here! Felt it all tha way through! My Rating: 4.3


16. "Off Top"
Over tha "Top Back" beat ('cause I heard it play throughout tha end of "The Payback"). Let's see in 2:21 of length… >>> Jammin', but tha beat bores me. Should've been somethin' different… I like tha acapella part at tha end and then where tha beat changes. My Rating: 3.6


17. "Fresh Prince (Blakk Remix)"
Let's hear this remix… >>> Great start wit tha "'bauds on." This sounds hot wit all tha wayz to stay fresh in tha hook! That 2nd verse was tha shit! This my favorite joint on this tape so far! Great shit I love it! My Rating: 4.5


18. "I Don't Know"
Lol @ tha title!! >>> It's okay so far… I don't mind hearin' it, but as I could say, "I don't know" about this one… My Rating: 3.5


19. "Thug Speaks"
Let's hear this Thug dude… >>> Good check-in. Too bad tha last 20 seconds were not of him… My Rating: N/A


20. "Bonafied"
Hope this iz good… I got a high AL for it! >>> I like that "Go DJ" sample! Tha beat iz pretty tight here! I LOVE THAT HOOK!!! Weezy F Baby!!!!! Nice jam right here!! Rhymes are good. EDIT: Gonna make my rating higher so now this iz my favorite on here! My Rating: 4.6


21. "Ride For The Team"
Prince Blakk on tha beat so this should be good! Another high AL for me! >>> Too short of length wit 2:22… At 1:50 "like Monopoly pieces, I'm on top of tha game;" that was a nice line on tha 2nd verse. I didn't say much about this joint, but it's nice. My Rating: 4.0


22. "Info On Tracks"
Good interlude title. Lemme hear! >>> One-i my dawg!! Yeah homeboy. I like when you say "homeboy" by tha way. My Rating: N/A


23. "My City"
High AL 'cause it sounds like an anthem!! >>> Sounds like a jacked beat… Maybe it ain't. It does sound familiar, but it's all good. Nice start. Real nice on tha rewindin' it back! I heard better anthems… This ain't really too anthemetic in terms of Louisiana. It's still good tho. My Rating: 4.1


24. "Dick Rider"
LMAO @ tha title!!! High AL on this! >>> Tha hook iz pretty good… Beat iz decent… Kinda short, but pretty good. My Rating: 3.8


25. "Outro"
Aight hope you're on tha outro homeboy! >>> Just by "homeboy", I can tell it's you dawg. I'm showin' luv right here! My Rating: N/A


Overall: End Time: 12:37 AM. Good shit. Definitely jammin' right here, even tho I think I liked tha 2007 mixtape "Witness The Underground 2: All Points Bulletin" mixtape better. I hope you like this review. This felt kinda short, but I didn't slack on this.


Rankings (according to ratings):

16. "I Don't Know" 3.5
15. "Off Top" 3.6
14. "Dick Rider" 3.8
13. "Grew Up A Screw Up" 3.8
12. "Money In The Bank (Remix)" Feat. Cooley 3.9
11. "Ride For The Team" 4.0
10. "Push It" 4.0
09. "Take A Ezzy" 4.1
08. "My City" 4.1
07. "It's Going Down" 4.2
06. "The Payback" 4.3
05. "Up On The North" 4.3
04. "Go Dumb" 4.3
03. "Shake Back" Feat. Sire Slim 4.4
02. "Fresh Prince (Blakk Remix)" 4.5
01. "Bonafied" 4.6